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Old 13 Mar 2005, 05:57 PM   #1 (permalink)
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Note: I am new here, but I write alot and am looking forward to posting here more often.......here is the song.....Please rate it and comment it, I am always looking for feedback, good or bad..........

Not always gonna make you moan
Soon as your heart, turns to stone,
Your fake insults are getting weary,
Don't make me run to you, dreay....

My itchy fungus warps around you,
Enjoying your ugly fumes
Smoke is clearing my dirty lungs,
My erection is numb.....

Your hole has long been filled,
But my shovel is untouched.
Let me fill you up,
With the sky's stars.

Our secret is under the covers,
Just dream me up a nightmare.
Bury you head in my loathing,
with your internal wounds....

Flee to me in surrounding pain,
The blood in your eyes.
Stroke your heart with empathy,
Upon deciding my fate as a man.
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Old 13 Mar 2005, 06:02 PM   #2 (permalink)
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It's cool, but if you want an advice: don't be the kind of guy who cries about everything in you're songs...85% of the artists are already using that thing to get some success.
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Pretty cool lyrics. I really couldn't tell you how it is as a song without hearing it being sung with some music. But lyrically, it looks great.
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