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Old 04 Jul 2004, 08:27 PM   #1 (permalink)
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she sleeps in a chair,
while i sit and stare...
dark reminder so fair.

allowing pointless remarks,
both knowing our pasts.

thoughts... i dont know where to start.

what is wrong with me?
why can no one figure it out?
does she seek my voice?
do i ask?
what is my choice?

my chance soon ... or is it?
will there be love for me?
this is it ... mind dismissed.

may i have my rejoice?
eternal questions i hoist.
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Old 06 Jul 2004, 05:10 AM   #2 (permalink)
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I would take the last stanza out...it gives the 5th stanza less meaning...I think the 5th stanza would be the perfect last stanza. (they are called stanzas..right?...being out of school sure takes it's load on the brain lol)
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i dont know what they are called exactly ..... and believe it or not ... i did horribly in english when i was in school
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