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Old 01 Jul 2004, 02:29 AM   #1 (permalink)
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the title of this poem cannot be pronounced ...

break neck speed...
flashing colours and light.
a wizards domain.....
a river and bridge...
around the corner from a world within.

a shadow af magic,
aquaintances and friends...
pointless fury, rage,
and attitude.

lifestyle breaking boundaries,
between politics and art.

well placed teamwork from all but me...
creating a new .... ?
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Old 01 Jul 2004, 03:28 AM   #2 (permalink)
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The last paragraph isn't needed, IMO....but it's still good. Is it about a car accident?
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its about a mural i painted with a girl i loved in the library at my high school 4 years ago.... that painting is still there and its something im very proud of
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Old 01 Jul 2004, 03:36 AM   #4 (permalink)
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Well I was a bit off lol...
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lol i can see how you get the idea of a car crash though .... i go a little crazy with symoblism sometimes
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I think that is part of what makes your poems so good.
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