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Old 24 Jun 2004, 01:47 AM   #1 (permalink)
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dreams, and the souls of the dead
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dreams, it seems .....

a fourtune to some, say i ....
a curse to others, say they...

cryptic thoughts provoked,
girls against boys,
children and toys,
a scream from a dark space,
somewhere within.

we tremble in fear of whats out in front,
a sea of monuments,
desecrated by lies,
in the dintace i cried.

"thoughts like 100 moths,
trapped in a lampshade...."

fear is the scene,
grass.......... brownish green.
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Old 01 Jul 2004, 02:38 AM   #2 (permalink)
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It describes exactly what, IMO, it should. Dreams. Nice job
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thanx for taking the time to read it .... i put a lot of heart into my poetry ... im glad you like it
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