The Three Horse Race

Mr. Submission · 02 Apr 2004, 04:16 AM

I gave you six months of my life
You took my breath away
You even made me break up with my woman at the time
I spent money on you through phonecalls and SMSs
You were amazing
You were an ace
Yet I came last in the three horse race.

I told you I loved you
You told me the same
You changed my perception of what was right and wrong
I wasted so much time on you
You threw it in my face.
Yes, I came last in the three horse race.

And just now
you tell me
You chose Joe out of us three?
All this time
you tell me
You couldn't trust me?
It's much the opposite bitch
I wanna put you in your place
Fuck this goddamn three horse race.

ICE MAN · 05 Apr 2004, 05:01 PM

Hey man thats a pretty good song but there are a few better then that!!!!

Neil #1 Fighter · 05 Apr 2004, 06:18 PM

Ya imo,it was alright but not that great.

Mr. Submission · 06 Apr 2004, 05:35 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by ICE MAN

Hey man thats a pretty good song but there are a few better then that!!!!

i hope you know it's not a song... its a poem... know what a poem is? yes... and it was about a break-up i just had... you understanding this kid?

SPEED · 06 Apr 2004, 11:20 AM

great poem Sub, I liked it

Mr. Submission · 08 Apr 2004, 04:37 AM

whoa... this thread just got a whole lot more intelligent... thanks bro.

02 Apr 2004, 04:16 AM	#1 (permalink)
Mr. Submission Secret Agent Join Date: Jan 2003 Location: Gold Coast, Australia Posts: 8,220 Rep Power: 811	The Three Horse Race I gave you six months of my life You took my breath away You even made me break up with my woman at the time I spent money on you through phonecalls and SMSs You were amazing You were an ace Yet I came last in the three horse race. I told you I loved you You told me the same You changed my perception of what was right and wrong I wasted so much time on you You threw it in my face. Yes, I came last in the three horse race. And just now you tell me You chose Joe out of us three? All this time you tell me You couldn't trust me? It's much the opposite bitch I wanna put you in your place Fuck this goddamn three horse race. __________________

05 Apr 2004, 05:01 PM	#2 (permalink)
ICE MAN Registered User Join Date: Apr 2004 Posts: 39 Rep Power: 0	Hey man thats a pretty good song but there are a few better then that!!!! __________________

05 Apr 2004, 06:18 PM	#3 (permalink)
Neil #1 Fighter Registered User Join Date: Dec 2003 Location: canada Posts: 944 Rep Power: 16	Ya imo,it was alright but not that great. __________________

08 Apr 2004, 04:37 AM	#6 (permalink)
Mr. Submission Secret Agent Join Date: Jan 2003 Location: Gold Coast, Australia Posts: 8,220 Rep Power: 811	whoa... this thread just got a whole lot more intelligent... thanks bro. __________________

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06 Apr 2004, 11:20 AM	#5 (permalink)
SPEED I just don't give a fuck! Join Date: Oct 2003 Location: Shit Jersey...I want to get the fuck out of this state Posts: 7,766 Rep Power: 656	great poem Sub, I liked it

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