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Old 17 Mar 2004, 10:11 PM   #1 (permalink)
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Side Effect is Jeff Goldblum's first spoken line on film.Side Effect is Jeff Goldblum's first spoken line on film.Side Effect is Jeff Goldblum's first spoken line on film.Side Effect is Jeff Goldblum's first spoken line on film.Side Effect is Jeff Goldblum's first spoken line on film.Side Effect is Jeff Goldblum's first spoken line on film.Side Effect is Jeff Goldblum's first spoken line on film.Side Effect is Jeff Goldblum's first spoken line on film.Side Effect is Jeff Goldblum's first spoken line on film.Side Effect is Jeff Goldblum's first spoken line on film.Side Effect is Jeff Goldblum's first spoken line on film.
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Incase you were wondering

If you wonder where I am, you can tell Iím not here.
I wished a pone a star, but the star didnít seem to care.
I told it what I wanted to hear, but it didnít want me there
So now Iím all alone, and I really donít know where

This place that you call our home, it isnít home at all
For the one time that I thought you were here, you wouldnít even call
Well now Iím here all by my self in a place I call my own
For the one time in my life Iím actually alone

This isnít where I want to be, but itís the best I think it can get
For the time you needed me the most, you never will never admit
In my mind I knew you cared, but you wouldnít even show
But now you know how much I care, but now I donít know.

It seemed as though my life was gone, but it never would show when
For I filled my spirit deep and full, and thatís when it was the end
I told myself that I was fine and I truly wanted to be there
But now I know it was a joke and it was you who needs to here.



comments would be appreciated
(btw, my friend wrote this.....and
she said it was OK if i posted it here)
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Old 21 Mar 2004, 07:02 PM   #2 (permalink)
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It's a great poem, even vetter than the one I wrote. I feel very sad for whoever wrote it cause that person's obviously going through the same shit I am....
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Old 06 Apr 2004, 07:16 PM   #3 (permalink)
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my heart goes out here, i know all too well about lonliness, and i understand totally, the writer has excellent abilty to express feelings as well
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