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Old 05 Jan 2004, 03:15 AM   #1 (permalink)
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MACHO MAN... THE ANIMATED SERIES!!!!

The concept is kind of like Scooby doo... Macho Man and 10 un-named kids ride around in the "Mach-Mobile" solving crimes around the country...

Episode 1 "The Haunted Castle of Machoness"

Scene 1 "Arrival"

Scene 2 "The Corpse"

Scene 3 "The Ghost"

Scene 4 "Capture"

Scene 5 "Ice Cream??? OOOOOH YEEEEAH!!!"


I'll be posting the story in instalments soon... Its basically gonna be like a really stupid comedy with Macho as the buffoon...

Don't bother me if you don't like it... Its just a crazy Idea that I thought up now at 1:00 am... and its not like its gonna bother anyone.... and its not any worse than the shit that makes the airwaves now...

Scene 1 will be here shortly....

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Old 05 Jan 2004, 03:56 AM   #2 (permalink)
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Default SCENE 1: “Arrival”

Setting- Foggy hills…Macho and the kids drive by an old castle.

Macho: Oooooh!! My Macho Senses are tingling… There’s been a murder in that castle!!!

(Macho Slams on the brakes spinning the Mach-Mobile into a sign before pulling over and stopping)

Macho: Hey kids!!! Lets go help the police!!!

Kid 1: Is this really a good Idea Macho??? I heard the castle was haunted!!!

Macho (Scared, Eyes bugged out): Huh-huh-huh-Haunted??

Kid 6 (From the back of the bus): That’s not true!! Its just superstition!!

The kids argue amongst themselves for a while…

Macho: Hey!! Calm down!! I’ve made my decision… we’re going…

(The Mach-Mobile pulls up to the castle. Macho and the Kids get out…The police already have the scene blocked off.)

Officer (Exasperated, like he’s done this a million times): Macho… This is a closed crime scene… you’ve got to go…

Macho: Step aside… the real crime solvers are here…

(Macho and the kids enter as the officer protests)

Officer: We already have the Per… (The slamming castle door cuts him off)
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Kid 5: Did you get us locked in Macho??

Macho: Oops… I guess I did…

(Shot of all the kids)

Kids 1-10 (In unison): MACHO!!!!]

(Close up of Macho’s face)

Macho: OOOOOH YEEEEEAH!!!!

The kids mumble and sigh… The word “Fucker” is heard quietly coming from the back…

-Commercial Spot by Macho for his CD-

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Old 05 Jan 2004, 03:58 AM   #3 (permalink)
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Default SCENE 2 “The Corpse”

(The crew enters the room where the body of a woman in her mid to late 20’s is lying dead. The body is about to be collected to be taken to the morgue)

Macho (Yelling): EVERYONE OUT!!!!

(Macho Throws the men picking up the body out of the room)

Kid 8 (Short, Kind of overweight, age 7)(loudly): Holy Fucking shit dude!! There’s a dead chick in this room!!!

(Macho throws a quick Jab, Catching the boy in the jaw. He lets out a yelp before crumbling to the floor)

Macho (Screaming): That’s a terrible word!!! Never say that again!!! The word “Chick” is so degrading to womenfolk… who are sex toys created by the lord Jesus Christ for the purpose of bearing our children and making breakfast…

Kid 1 (bent over, looking at the body): Hey… there’s something written on her back.

Kid 5: What does it say Macho???

(Macho stares at the body… then begins to shake.)

Macho: I can’t read!!!!

(He falls to the floor)

Kid 1(Patiently): Sound it out…

Macho: Juh-juh-jack…

Kid 1: You’re doing good…

Macho: Jack T-t-he Ghost Was Here!!!

(Macho Shrieks in horror) (One smaller kid in the back begins to cry)

Kid 5: What do we do now Macho??

Macho: I’ll go investigate… you kids stay here…

The kids (in unison): Ok Macho!
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Old 05 Jan 2004, 04:37 AM   #4 (permalink)
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Default SCENE 3: “The Ghost”

(Macho is sneaking down the hall)

(He ducks into a room)

Macho (Stupidly): Hellooooooooooo!!!! (Looks around) Anyone here!?!?!?

(A figure steps out from the shadows. It’s a man… with a white sheet over his head, you can very easily see his feet coming out of the bottom)

Ghost (walking foreward): Oooooooh!! Leave this pl…

(He trips on the sheet, falling and exposing his entire body)

Ghost (On ground): Fuck!

(The ghost picks himself up, putting the sheet back on his head)

Ghost (With arms out of the sheet, aligning his eye holes): Leave Dammit!!

Macho (staring in horror): AAAUGH!!! GHOST!!!

Ghost: Yeah… That’s me… leave…

Macho (loudly): NO!!! I challenge you to a battle rap!!!

Ghost: Uhhhh… the hell??

(Its too late, Macho Starts rapping… Psychedelic colors fill the room)

(To the tune of “Be a Man”)

Ghost Man, Ghostie Ghoster!!!! Whatever they call you
I'm coming after you, Murderer!!!

Hot diggity damn Ghost you set me off
Used to be good ghost,
Now you got all scary like
Me and my Macho crew we seen ya…

(Macho Stops, The colors fade, The ghost has disappeared)

Macho: Hey!! It was your turn next!! (pauses) Ghost Man?!?! (Scared) H-h-e’s watching me!!!

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Default SCENE 4: “Capture”

(Cut to hallway)

Ghost (Running, Covering ears): NOOOO!! Make it stop!!!

(The sheet sides back, covering his eyes, he runs blindly down the cartoonishly never-ending hallway)

(The Kids Dive out of no-where and take him down)

Ghost: I did it!! I did it!! I admit to it!!!

(Macho Dives on him and pummels him)

Macho (out of breath): We did it Kids!!! Lets go get some Ice Cream!!!

(The kid’s yell out cheerfully in unison, the words “Queer” and “Fucktard” are heard)

(Macho and the kids exit the castle as 2 cops enter)

(One kid stays behind)

Cop 1: Who is this guy??

Cop 2: I dunno, I think he’s that crazy hobo that lived by highway 5 a while back.

Cop 1: I’m getting the hell outta here… we already got the perp…

Kid 10 (to cops): Hey… If that door was locked how did they leave??

(The cops stand, staring)

Kid 10: And why was that writhing on that corpse??

(Standing still)

Cop 2: Maybe you ought to just go with Macho now…

Kid 10(Ignoring the advice): And I refuse to believe that Randy Savage is that stupid that he actually believed that that guy was a ghost!!!

Cop 1: I’m getting the fuck outta here now!!

Cop 2: Yeah kid… you’re on your own now!!

(The cops run out of the house)

(Kid stands there, Confused)

(A giant eraser descends, killing the boy as he screams in agony)

(Close up of Macho’s face)

Macho: Ooooooh Yeah!!!!

-Commercial-
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Old 05 Jan 2004, 04:50 AM   #6 (permalink)
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Default SCENE 5: “"Ice Cream??? OOOOOH YEEEEAH!!!"

(Exterior shot, Macho’s Ice cream parlor)

(Macho pops up from behind the counter)

Macho: What can I get for you kids??

(The kids shout what they want all at once)

Macho (angrily): Hold on you greedy little fuckers!!! None for you tubby!!! (Pointing at Kid 6)

(Kid 6 falls to the ground sobbing)

(Some time later)

(Macho Comes to the table with empty Ice Cream Cones)

Kid 4 (angrily): Where’s the Ice cream?!?!?

Macho (Ice Cream Smeared all over his face): I dunno!!!

Kids (In unison): MACHO!!!!

(Close up of Macho)

Macho: OOOOOOOOOOOOOOOH YEEEEEAH!!!!!

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Ty for reading... If the response is good I will write more episodes....
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LMAO...pure excellence.
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You should submit this to FOX. Seriously, they'll take anything
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....Hell I loved it.

That was quite the story you put together Trev.....

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Hell of a story Trevel,nicely done..
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Ok... just an update....

Episode 2 coming soon...

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