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Old 23 Nov 2002, 10:26 PM   #1 (permalink)
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Default a song i wrote out of boredom- called Early Childhood

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So what about the times that you had with your boys
Back in preschool yall use ta play with tinkertoys
Makin noise, you was just kids
No body cared
It was too cute if your tempers flared
So your growin up, goin into the first grade
but your momma and your daddy aint exactly paid
Your father really seems to be into some games
like "beat my wife, with my lead pipe's aid"
an even trade was made when you was just eight
bein shipped 2 a foster home, by frieght, not so great
in a crate that you cant escape out of
and all you ever wanted was to show just a little love
up above, you wanna know if gods shinin on you
and one day, you hope, that your wishes will come true
cuz your just a first grader with so much life
but aint no body wanna be payin ya price
your future's bright, but l prolly be delayed
can u rmember the first time that you felt betrayed
so hang strong day long time goes by
you were an early child mistake, but theres no need to cry
your future's bright, but l prolly be delayed
can u rmember the first time that you felt betrayed
so hang strong day long time goes by
you were an early child mistake, but theres no need to cry
so time went by, time did fly
you didnt go to college
you started doin crimes
sellin bags of dimes
ounces of marijuana
but- all you really wanna wanna all you really wanna
do is fit wit cha crew, that aint down wit chu
but cuz the words you slew, you just sittin there stuck
reppin the blue, and if you ever turn on em ya get plucked
so you try to escape, you jack a truck
and try to drive down i 95, thank god your still alive
prolly escape to mexico where u can start a new life
but wait, the cops throw spikes, your tires deflate
spinnin out of control, now you aint thinkin straight
suddenly, your car takes a sudden swerve
hit a pole, damage to your brain, back, and nerves
your future was bright, but you waited to long
and its sad to say, but now your life is gone
your future was bright, but that's all in the past
early childhood was hard, and your life went by fast
but it wasnt your fault, you werent given a chance
sad to say, half the world could give a rat's ass
cuz as advanced as we are, and as much as we care,
we'll be put behind bars, while spectators stare
Atcha funeral,everybody at the uniral
No obituary, no article in the tribunal
uno dos tres
they wont ever see your face
you wont have to suffer in this terrible place
after the police chase, you never woke up
ya whole body been broke up
you toked up
one too many times
livin a life of sex, money and lies
suprise! here comes ya boys
or you though they were
they stumbled in smellin like alcohol, they words slurred
flippin birds, screamin out hate words
sayin you were fake, callin you a nerd
but word...check it
you jus a body 2 them, they dont need to respect it
but now, why should you care?
they dont got a future, they better be prepared
they comin face 2 face with the devil
and now
you on a whole other level
you up in heaven floatin like a feather
now look at some one else, n say there life is better?
your livin in the future, so forget the past
livin in a perfect world, no pain, green grass
music blasts as loud as you want
and i hope in this song, a lesson's been taught.
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