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Old 25 Oct 2002, 11:23 PM   #1 (permalink)
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Ok...well I am actully too lazy to go find the thread i started about my english paper with the halloween short story...here is the final version....so i thought i'd share! tell me what ya think
Quote The Raven
On late Hallows Eve a boy the name of James Freebird was watching horror movies as any sixteen-year-old boy would. After finishing Jason X last movie he had rented, James headed up into his room. Then when entering his room he heard an eerie voice say his name. James knew it could not have been his mother or his father for they were on a business trip. Five seconds after he had heard the first voice he heard the same voice say, “You cannot hide.” James quickly shook his head and looked around his room to see someone there…but no one was in his room except him. James started to tell himself that it was only his mind playing tricks on him.

Twenty minutes had soon passed and he had not heard an eerie voice and started to relax. James started to think that one of his friends was just playing a trick on him to scare him. Suddenly he heard a voice…the same from before in his room… calling out his name once again. Then the lights started to flicker on and off and he ran from his room to the living room that was downstairs. Cold sweat started to drip from his forehead down to his shirt. Then mysteriously a raven appeared and all of the lights went out.

The raven was pitch black and his eyes were glowing red almost as if it was a demon. The raven seemed to be looking at the floor yet it seemed to know every move James made. Now James was panicking. It was raining, the raven came out of nowhere, and he was hearing weird voices.

Suddenly the raven spoke into James mind “You can run boy, but you cannot hide. You can think whatever you wish, but I can hear that.”

Now James not knowing what to do except he was cornered and there is nowhere else to go. James then saw a black figure moving towards him from the hall. It was not the raven for it was still perched there in its same position is was when it appeared.
As the black figure came nearer to James the fireplace lit with fire. The raven moved from his position to the mantle right above the fireplace. The figure was becoming clearer now. It was wearing a black trench coat, a dark brown gangster hat and pitch-black shoes and socks. Its face was pale as chalk and with dark “bags” underneath his eyes…almost as if he were dead.

Then the figure was right in front of James. Finally the figure spoke…
“Don’t run…Don’t hide…because your spirit is already mine…”
James woke up with his head and pillow drenched in sweat. He looked around his room…making sure that no dark figure or raven was there. No one was there except him and the sun that was coming in through his window that looked out onto his side yard. James ran downstairs to see if the fireplace had any ashes.

As James approached the fireplace he saw a firry streak of light from the corner of his right eye. James quickly turned but nothing was there. Then he found an ivory velvety paper with a glowing red cursive writing on it. It read, “You have gotten away this time…but watch your back and watch what you say because we are here to stay, quote the Raven”


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P.S. I'll probably make a image for the note that the Raven leaves behind for James. I already made the title hee hee
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Old 25 Oct 2002, 11:27 PM   #2 (permalink)
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That's the most interesting thing I've read all day. That's pretty good.
 
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hey thats scary im going to have night mares now lol j/p
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I was thinking for a minute there that the dark figure was gonna be the Undertaker. LOL
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lol ....i never thought of that KK lol......

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man....that was koo
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Good Story WW.
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