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Old 10 Oct 2002, 04:15 PM   #1 (permalink)
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OK...if u have some poem that u wrote or even just plainly like..post it here.

I don't really write alot of poetry..mainly songs..which if done properly can be poetic

Here's a song I wrote

"She believes that no matter what if the change doesn't fall they don't look back..people passing everywhere, throwing down their callous stares.

Everytime she starts to cry, tears roll down from the greenest eyes, empty bottle at her feet, no one she will ever meet...

Will look past what she seems to be and see in her reality, that within this hurting shell, lives a beautiful life that's been through hell.

As the Streetlight glows she thinks on back and smokes a broken ciggerette..buts it out and thinks of when , I never said I'd be her friend again.

She believes in the standard that when people walk by they don't look back....my head is turned all the way around
Glowing under the city lights she looks to the left, looks to the right.....fades away in the dark, dark, night.

Wind blows over everyday,no thoughts of me will blow her way.
She throws away that empty glass no wine is left and she's a mess. No wine is left and she's a wreck, no wine...


That's just a little ballad I wrote on my Acoustic..but I hope u like the lyrics Feel free to give any feedback.

Feel free to post any poems , songs..anything creative that sparks your interst
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Old 10 Oct 2002, 04:26 PM   #2 (permalink)
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OMG, that was really good!!! Like, good enough to be a song
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Old 10 Oct 2002, 04:28 PM   #3 (permalink)
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sometimes I just sit back and wonder what was meant to be learned from that event that occured everything happens for a reason right I left behind just another tragic lesson in life an organic rush adrenaline flight high above the traumatised situation of life...it's ironic, considerate rarity patron of love, higher knowledge engulfs me 'cause, the blast of fate a lesson, to my eyes concerned and overwhelmed theirs were of fear yet I'm feelin' so empty inside and yet it burns so awkward this..time.....tears a waterfall of acid cries from his, eyes, I need to recognize, it's meant to be...he's alive and his cries just begin arisin' suprisin' as well...this little boy proud of helpin' those in need but he's not me but just maybe he could be, I can see it now because, I'm a hero in his eyes temporarily blind this immature kid a spirit as well an angel, hiding by helping and wanting to understand..me...it's somethin' with my pride, lies, I cannot hide my true side, and maybe in distress i can still come out laughing that's the way I am...am I hard to recognize? what do I need to realize? why can't I see with my own eyes? what do I need to see?
 
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Old 10 Oct 2002, 10:44 PM   #5 (permalink)
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let me give you a little guess? at what it is i do best? i write with question marks? i don't go to city parks? i ride around all day? while you just go out and play? does this make any sense? let the questions commence? just something i thought i would share with you?
 
 


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