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Old 24 Mar 2003, 08:53 PM   #1 (permalink)
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The Falling

The road bends,
Nothing is clear,
Your mind falls,
Immense fear.
The wall of hatred,
Built to retreat,
The somber sound
Of fallen feet.
A perfect world,
Could it be?
I fall and pray,
On bended knee.
The wallowing hope,
Keeps on calling,
But no matter what,
I keep on falling.


This is dedicated to my Sodagirl......
 
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Awwww...That's a great poem Blitzy. Thanks for the dedication.

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Old 26 Mar 2003, 04:33 PM   #3 (permalink)
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umm it's not bad 9/10
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Old 26 Mar 2003, 06:07 PM   #4 (permalink)
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7/10....i dont like the end
 
 


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